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Old 09-07-05, 10:52 AM   #14
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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From: Boston
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^^Felt ur punches hit harder, though ur structure was whack and had no flow...u beat him wit punches and personals

As i put you in handcuffs and read you your rights,
you're getting taken away for your recent rap-fights
put on this jumpsuit, meet your cell-mate Bubba
Until you face the judge, he'll be your full-time luva
you've been briefed on the court case,.. today is the date,
you'll be standing on trial, and meeting your fate
All the charges brought against you are for battling Peace
"he's* not dangerous, judge, you can take off his leash"
The people on this (web)site will be the prosecution
you have no defense team, and you're facin' execution
The judge is calling "order" and he's slammin the gavel
As your next loss, and my win begin to unravel
You try to hold back a tear, but it rolls down your cheek
As the jury deliberates for under a week
Now the room goes silent for the verdict their supplyin
They say AITZ found guilty for self-glorifyin

felt ur verse was sorta played and childish dont feel u attacked ur opponent at alll........
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