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Old 09-07-05, 03:11 PM   #7
Premanition
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Voted For: Young Blaze

okay decent battle although to me onesided....

young - fire verse...let me break it down

Like Childern Chewin on Fake Pistols Check me Spit Tech Gunz
u aint got 2 wait three hundred years to see E Clipse Get Sunned
Good opener, multis and a creative punch...

Talking Shit, while i'm Walkin Tha Strip,n u'll get Popped N Tha Hip
cuz its like "Skeletons" da way ain't 'NO BODY' Rockin Wit Clipse
Decent, not special but okay

tell every one to place their bets n Double Their Limits
cuz ur trying to tell Me about sex...when "E-Clipse"..
...................................only last a Couple Of Minutes
NIce....funny punch...lol...like that

sound Like u Piss In a Tremble, im ahead of u, ya Missin the LeveL
got dough my Chips Earned, ill leave "Lipse Burned"..
.................................................. like Kissin the Devil
hot hot punch, loved this, very original...dope

Dis rook Doomed To Destruction, ya Text Consumed In Abduction
U fallin Cuz i Trip Feet, im givin "Clipse Beats"...
..................................like the Neptunes Production.
HaHaHa.....you gotta laugh, thats dope

Hurl Wit My Palm I Slap This Scared Girl Wit A Bomb an Gat
I Stay Above "E" Like Jerry-Curls In A Compton Hat....
Nice closer, again creative and original

Overall - Dope vERse Young!!!

E-Clipse -

o.k this was an alrite verse but to be honest nothin stands out just some average punches but nothin really hit hard, im explaining here but I got no quotables and on this occasion that summed up this battle....keep droppin

good but on this occasion no way near gud enough

Peace
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