Voted For: Young Blaze
omfg u owned dat nigga
YOUNG BLAZE
Like Childern Chewin on Fake Pistols Check me Spit Tech Gunz
u aint got 2 wait three hundred years to see E Clipse Get Sunned(NICE ASS OPENER)
Talking Shit, while i'm Walkin Tha Strip,n u'll get Popped N Tha Hip
cuz its like "Skeletons" da way ain't 'NO BODY' Rockin Wit Clipse(DAYUM DAT SHIT WUZ DA BEST LINE OF DA BATTLE)
tell every one to place their bets n Double Their Limits
cuz ur trying to tell Me about sex...when "E-Clipse"..
...................................only last a Couple Of Minutes(IIGHT IIGHT FEELN DAT)
sound Like u Piss In a Tremble, im ahead of u, ya Missin the LeveL
got dough my Chips Earned, ill leave "Lipse Burned"..
.................................................. like Kissin the Devil(DAYUM DAT SHIT WUZ NICE)
Dis rook Doomed To Destruction, ya Text Consumed In Abduction
U fallin Cuz i Trip Feet, im givin "Clipse Beats"...
..................................like the Neptunes Production.(OH SHIT NICE)
Hurl Wit My Palm I Slap This Scared Girl Wit A Bomb an Gat
I Stay Above "E" Like Jerry-Curls In A Compton Hat....(NICE CLOSURE)
YOUNG BLAZE- yo shit wuz on point nigga. lemme start it off by sayin errthing flowed nicely for u. yo punches and personals hit hard as shit n da rhymes u used were str8 killin. Ur structure cudda been a lil bit betta, but dats iight. Iuno wat else ta say mayne yo shit was damn near flawless.
9.5/10
E clipse
I laugh at this dick, really he poses no lyrical threat
Packin’ E-Style, yea but he loses it when he signs off the net(O.K OPENER)
Batter this fucka bloody and leave his ass unsteady
Cuz unlike his sig, this kids style, it just ain’t Red-E(NICE ONE) (ready)
Ure weak with no skill, so don’t expect the praise
Cuz I’ll only ‘need to spit’ to ‘extinguish this Young Blaze’(HAHA IM FEELIN DAT ONE MAYNE)
Kid ain’t gangsta, its hide ‘n’ seek that he likes to play
Cuz he’s dope at it, he’s the only kid who gets to hide all day(UMMMMM.........NOT THAT GOOD)
But yo, I’ll make ya the centre of attention when I beat ya fast
Cuz I’ll beat yo face in and have it swollen up like J-Lo’s ass(MEH)
Yea I’m done with you now, quick to diminish ya game
And set fire to yo ass to add some REAL flare to ya name(DECENT CLOSURE)
E CLIPSE- I wuz feelin sum of yo shit n sum of it wuznt really hittn. I like ur personals and punches throughout tha battle, but it wuznt HARD. Some of ya rhymes came weak but were used in a good way which made ur verse betta. If u came harder wit sum of ya rhymes u wudda had a shot. Structure wuz str8 n easy ta read.
8/10 decent verse
BEST LINE OF WHOLE BATTLE- "Talking Shit, while i'm Walkin Tha Strip,n u'll get Popped N Tha Hip
cuz its like "Skeletons" da way ain't 'NO BODY' Rockin Wit Clipse"
Dat wuz da knockout punch mayne
PROPS TA BOF YALL ON A DECENT BATTLE, but i jus felt dat Young Blaze brought da HEAT on dis 1
v/YB
ay yo cud u rtf an honest vote on mah battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207401
^^It wud b appreciated