Voted For: Vaskez
Vaskez
Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack
^^^DECENT OPENER
I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it
^^O.K
My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"
^^HA HA GOOD 1
Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon
^^DECENT CLOSURE
VASKEZ- yo verse wuz decent. U had some personals n punches in dere dat wuz pretty good. U had a few strtched lines which i didnt like. U also need ta work on ya structure n datz about all. Good Average Verse
8/10
FRAUD
The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter
^^WACK
Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline
^^^MEH
u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em
^^^MEH
vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it
^^O.K
Fraud- yo verse wuz weak man. Da opener wuz wack as hell. I mean bread n butter, come on u can do betta den dat. U had very little punches, most of yo shit talked about guns n clappin n killin, n im pretty sure u've done none of the above or even tote a gun. In batttlin u supposed ta diss ya opponent the only decent line wuz your closure. Yo have much room for improvement. You must elevate more n work on your personals n punches. Structure wuz str8 doe.
pretty below average verse
6/10
Weak battle but in the end ima have ta go wit Vaskez for mo punches n personals and comin harder
V/Vaskez
cud u plz rtf on mah battle w/ an honest vote
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207401
^^it wud be appreciated nahmean