Voted For: Mimesis

memisis- punches are solid,especially the box/house line. I felt that hit hard.
Opener is good. closure is solid.
You have alot more punches, that hit harder than deranged.

deranged. the use of that qoute didnt work to well for you, not sure..just doesnt seem to fit in.
Your opunches are weak, only good punch was the play on his name but you still didnt use it in a creative way.
opener is the qoute lines, didnt like them personally. Closure didnt hit hard at all.