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Old 09-07-05, 07:49 PM   #8
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Voted For: the s!zz

s!zz- Ok with the lines kind of extended out and you kinda also could have been made more since, and wtf with the big sig. Good punches ok with the words but winner and sinner? Try a little better with that one overall ok with the flow and everything just like a normal battle.


tim dim- short lines just like quick spit? wasn't a verse no hate but elevate...and elevate. and elevate read peoples verses then come back and work on yours..... you need everything flow wordplay i could go on forever, oh ya one more thing elevate
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