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Old 09-08-05, 12:02 AM   #13
anxiety
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From: colorado
IP:

Verse 1-Terrible Flow, other than that I still wasn't feelin it that much...
Verse 2- Boo the suicidal bullshit...
Verse 3- Dope, flow and all, just dope...
Chorus- Pretty good as well...
Verse 4- Good job willa, but what the hell is ---->bourgeoisie
Verse 5- I liked this verse as well, uneven lines kills flow though...
Verse 6- Started out dope... Middle lines were kinda weak, then you had a dope closer that went with the topic, good job...
Verse 7- Really good job here as well...

Good job guys..
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