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Old 09-08-05, 01:20 AM   #19
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aight yo you win becuase your shit actuualy rhymed with diff. words instead of saying shit alot of times,

aight yo

tim: you need to get better vocab and learn how to make better lines you need to work alot harder on all of your verses i have read other shit by you and its not that good... but you got poetienal so just keep working at it

sizz: you sayed you rushed your verse and it showed but you had more witty lines and you actually rhymed with some kinda vocab that is why you win


can you please RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228
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