this was a pretty close battle.........xtortion your verse, although longer than apostrophes, lacked depth.....there was no imagery there but you did have nice vocab....however most lines could have been worded better
apostrophe your verse was nice, imagery was there, i enjoyed reading it, you could have upped your vocab a little......coz it was a little too simple, but i felt you pulled it off because of the imagery......

overall both verses were lacking depth, a little too simple.....however apostrophe gets my vote because his had imagery and a good storyline.....

vote- Apostrophe

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