Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack
iight opener and nice punch and wordlay^

I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it
it was iight but wasnt feelin too much but still nice

My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"
iight punch nothin special^

Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon
i like tha wordplay,nice closer...good job^




The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter
^this wasnt a great opener and a bad attempt,not good

Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline
^iight punch but u stretched tha line too much and u shouldnt have went from craters to trampolinez,wut waz tha thing about for crater?...iight but nuthin special

u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em
^ horrible attempt at a punch,linez were too stretched

vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it
^bad closer not that great of a punch

Fraud-work on structure and punches and personals...also multiez and metafors...jus elevate and you'll git better...work at it

vaskez-it was iight but u should jus elevate a little...u dont need topo much work

nice job both of u... jus work on it and git better...i cant vote yet so im jus breakin it down into feeback...holla at shya boy