Voted For: L.I.
L.I.
ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
^Good wordplay, also nice punch man..7/10^
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
^Again nice wordplay/reference...and punch 8/10^
ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis
^Lmao mad me laugh.....thats a low blow 6/10^
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests
^Nice reference and diss, good closer...6/10^
Overall-Ur verse was filled with.....Good punches...they hit hard indeed....ur personals were felt with good wordplay....vocab was iight nothing to nag about....overall 8/10 for ur verse
Do Continue
this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.
^Good multis ok punch nothing special 4/10^
seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame?
DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane
^Good wordplayy and nice punch 6/10^
mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch
is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment
^Lol nice punch and way to insert is initials 7/10^
couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell
he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L.
^Mehh not feelin this closer...coulda been better 5/10^
Overall-Ur verse was ok, good word play and some hard punches..most weak....personals were ok...but nothing special..overall ur verse was 5/10^
v/L.I.
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