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Voted For: Batman
Batman-
I didn’t like it that much… It made sense though it had decent wordplay and punches they lines could have evened out more it would help a lot and look better too instead of all crooked and you did a decent job of opening the battle on going first.i liked you third and fourth line the best even though it was still basic but it was cool.
NoToRiOuS D-
I didn’t like yours at all , it was spaced out and didn’t make too much sense I don’t know if you are a kid or not or your maybe even older than me but it didn’t seem like to good of a verse didn’t like it at all. Not much wordplay and you tried to have to much of a flow , as in trying to hard, I think you could do a lot better
v/bat
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