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Old 09-08-05, 07:35 PM   #26
SkY hIgH sKiLlZ
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Voted For: Batman

yo i read some of ur battles and all your doin is throwin jabs
but tha punches im throwin hit harder than concrete slabs
creative...iight opener

you need to elevate mayne u aint nuthin yet
im a noob but up against u i feel like a vet
nice little jab or punch w/e u wanna call it,liked it

i figure that 6 linez is all it should take to bury you 6 feet deep
im too good to battle u in person so drop ur verse when u hear tha beep
kinda made me laugh and it was pretty creative,good job

yo i stopped for a minute and now im back and comin at u head on
im better than that bitch that calls him the brooklyn don
didnt really git it,not such a good closer

elevate and keep at it batman



I Get them stacked, accept the fact
There is no way you could beat me....the skillz is what you lack
You see me, protect ya back
^pretty good opener but too basic,it was jus iight

Nigga, you cant come near me
Im like fire, err' body fears me
im like ludacris...im coming for the numba 1 spot...ya hear me
not good,i hated that you rymed me every time but it was good that u had some multies,still not good though

Yo this is no joke...ma burner will leave you unwoke
Mad smoke in this hood....it'll make you choke
pretty good,a little basic but nice

Where I'm from son, snitches like you be dialing 911
But those the one you find in the alley filled wit 9 dum-dums
nice multies and a pretty good closer but that dum dums thing was wack but a nice attempt

batman had the verse overall...it was hard becuz both of yall need to elevate and up ya vocab and structure and flow...but no hate to either of you,keep at it

v/batman