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Voted For: Payn
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Payn Ain Worth Disses, Since He Bitches...So Much I Mistook Him 4 Misses
Upset Cuz Everyone Dismiss His, "SLAVE TRACS" Like Their SUBMISSIVE!
Decent opener, conjured up a punch here w/ wordplay.7/10
Like a Fiend Dis Crack Twitches, Ya Washed Up Raps Should B On Dishes
Father Used Ta Fuck Him "UPON A STAR"...So "PAYN" Was His "WISHES"! (omg think)
This was better then the first bar, stronger punch,liked the worplay in this multi.9/10
Killin §eed Ya Cant Do, Who Amped U?? Wears Spongebob On His Ankles
Mama Used Ta Spank U, For Not Standin Up For Yaself Like.....Fat Crews!!
hmm,ok punch, felt it didnt connect well, with what you were trying to say..5/10
Merked Wit No Thank You's, Ur Gay In Your Heart You Really Want Dudes
But You Proved, Ta Da Whole Site U Got Fucked...Whut Laxatives U Use!? (lmaooo)
lol,this was funny to me, nice connected punch here, and the worplay was good in this bar,stronger.9/10
If You In Payn Its Cause §eed Stole Your Reign, Now You Have No Name
Unless You Borrow An "ATHLETES INJURY"...& Call Yaself "PRO-PAYN"!
Your best bar of the battle,nice closer,connected the punch, it worked.9/10 overall nice verse
[I][CENTER][COLOR=Purple]havin sex w/ out protection, is tha only time ur considered a Sicc~Seed
cuz ya rhymes r like Infectionz, eva time u spit ya passin out STDS
hmm, decent punch, have heard this before so seemed generic, could have come harder for an opener.5/10
i silence kids like duct tape and violence shit..i'll Wrap~A~Watch~Round~My~Fist
then punch ya eye lids just ta Show~U~What~Time~It~Is
strong punch, didnt like how you strucutred it,was longer then it needed to be,but decent.8/10
This guy's bitch..it take time ta trip i'll tie is kicks togther..and watch him fall,
as I~Walk~All~Ova~Daub~Lotz.. like i can't find my whip decent, but not strong, it didnt connect, some bars seem stretched.7/10
what kind a shit is this, a laugh is all i'll give his ass..and maybe a punch
i ain't say'n wut up when i Extend~My~Fist~Ta~DaP
forget the raps, there's no alum-in-um.. and they foil still
You just make Ah-Sea look back like Trash and Oil spills(Aussie)your bars a maaad stretched which messes with ya structure, like the wordplay in this one,but still needs to be written better.8/10
boi you'll feel sick alot but not cause ya tinka drops
after deaths occur is the only time people Digg'n in ya Flower Box
ok closer, but could have worded it better, and made it more hard hitting..6/10..overall need structure help
Sic-40
payn-34...str8 battle both,rtf in the siggy. pc
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