Voted For: DAZZLE

Blasphemy
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since age 12 I was told white boys can't rap//
now I'm hear to cut you down to a pile of crap//
my names blashpemy cause my rhymes are a sin//
this may be my first battle but I'm destined to win//
I'm lyricaly blessed//
a man so oppressed//
a little obsessed//
bound to be best//
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reallly weak man....you need elevating real bad...on lines..and structure...and these // dont use them...they make ur verse look retarded...and make the site look stupid..
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DAZZLE
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Easier to battle ya mum, she brought yo here so il use slyness~to~diss~her...
No dough no love and ya rappers money....... is a minus~figure...
I could beat you with quick keyed lines coz im just~that~sick...
Take this easy, you cant write for shit....your dys~lex~ic...
You disrespect god?, well i dont give a fuck for him so cant hate you for it...
but god jesus and this MC all have somethin in common...YOUR ALL BULLSHIT!!
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how did you know he was bullshit?, lol...nice verse dude...yet againt~these~dont~help....ur punchlines wasnt to bad...which got my vote....elevate some more dude

v/ DAZZLE

can i get an RTF as well....Cheers homies....its in my sig...werd

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