Thread: Death vs Batman
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Old 09-08-05, 08:49 PM   #14
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Voted For: Death

Ill burn BATMAN of his wins... call this a ROBIN
its like murdering cows.. the way i got this BEEF STOPIN
Like everyone who has battled him hasen't used a robin line almost exactly like that... and the second line is unoriginal.

this dude BLOWS on the mic, he must think its COCK
my guns to this fag like a MOVIE.. Im seeing CLIPS n DROPS
...No.

151 posts, and im still more of a vet
ill send bullets like AIR... so they STORE IN YA CHEST
What the fuck does post count have to do with anything? And the second line was more glorification...bad wordplay.

my raps will RING IN YA SLEEP... so CALL THIS A DREAM
its like you wearin HOT PANTS.. cause i make u SCOULD AT THE SEAMS
...Nope. Still not hitting hard.

ten lines is enough to murk this jerk.. ive left him hurt
ill leave this WORM dead.. its about time he SLEPT IN DIRT
Gah. No.


yo maybe this muhfuckas death will be by a bat bite
u say im the whackest and u were almost right
Ehh...Nah.

cuz tha only one wacker than me is ur bitch ass
ur rymes are to simple ill shatter you like glass
Not so original.

i hear that u might be the next big thing,but imma clean ur clock
tha next biggest thing that u see will in ur mouth and itll be my cock
On the first time you should've used a 'time' line for that clock, but that would've been original. Okay.

yo this muhfuckers 20 and he wants to battle sumone 7 years yunger
ill quench ur thirst with cum and use my dick to end your hunger
Age don't matter. Second line, nah.

you said that in an hour u could write 1000 linez
but im tha one who could cuz im a lyrical mastermind
...Nah. :\

I'm giving it to Death for more originality and creativity, and an attempt at wordplay.


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