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Old 09-08-05, 09:01 PM   #23
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Voted For: lilrenegade89

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Yo check it..
Its time ta battle so dont be afraid/
Cuz once i own u u aint gonna be paid/
Once i finish u off ull be trippin'/
And when ur trippin' ima be pimpin'/
Sad that when u lose u prolly gonna cry/
So u might as well cry now to get ur eyes dry/
Wack asses like u dont deserve to be on the forum/
When it rains in ya countryside, ya gonna be washed away by a rainstorm/
Killin ya with a fist will be easy/
Beating me?No it wont be that ez/
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very weak ass battle from the both of you.../ this shyt/ doesnt help ur structure/ aiight.../ you had hardly any punchlines bro...the verse wasnt good enough to get my vote...werd no haten or disrespect.
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lilrenegade89
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yo i smash ya face/ 2 fast for you, ill make ur ass a fuckin basket case/ why u wanna battle me , when a gun would be a faster race/ the only thing different ill be winnin with a faster pace/
im a husstla you ain't got nuttin on me/ im the type of nigga that will smash your kneez. with too bats you see/ then call that bloody work of art a mother fuckin master peice/ wrap your body up in a plastic sheet/
thats how you never gotta feal my heat/
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dude...this was a weak ass verse as well...and you both need a vocab...but arh...you got my vote becuase of the effort of punchlines you had in ur verse.....werd!

v/ lilrenegade89

can i get a RTF as well....cheers homies......werd its in my signature...
pCe
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