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Old 09-08-05, 11:52 PM   #19
InfiniteStan
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Voted For: Bone Collector

v/bone collector...both verses need better structure
and need to hit harder with punches...bonecollector got it because he had better punches .but still needs to elevate ..

notorious d... you need to fix your structure..you really havent been elevatin since i battled you.. u need to stop writtin the same word at the end of each punch..and most of it wasnt even a punch.. so wat does that tell you?..u need to elevate.. just get that structure fixed and elevate on your vocab and youll be ok...but no hate .. if you read my shit and there needs to be corrections on mine. then go head and say aiight.. but just elevate cuz u really havent since i battled you!!!
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