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Old 09-09-05, 05:26 AM   #38
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Voted For: Robert De Niro

Stanza
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He "Runnin Assfault" In Jail So He Get "Passed Around" Like "Track Battonz"
How Can You "Beat Me" When You Workin With "Pussie'z" Like "Yvonne?"
You Shit Doesnt Carry "No Weight" Like You is Writting With "Light Text"
But Your Lines Still Dont "Shine" Even If You Was Rockin "Oiled "Spandex"
Two Wins? Ha Thats Not a Winning Streak Thats A Shit Stain In Rv's Draws
So Ill Clorox Your Nutz So We Wont See The Division In Your Balls (lol)

6 Lines Done Now You Got The "Shit That Runs" So Ill Call You "Lil Squirtz"
I Know You a "Pussy" Bcuz I seen Your "Stuff" When You Wore That "Skirt"
"Changing The Wheels On My Car" Is The Only Time Youll See me "Re-Tire"
Then Ill Put You In A "Skillet At a Camp Fire" So That You can Be "On-Fire"
You Week So Ill Let The Punctual Actions of my Keyboard Finish Him Like
!@!#!@!@@!#!@#!@#!@#!@@#!@##!@#!@#!!!!!! You Dyke
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WhAt EvEr It TaKeS
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exposed, cause stanza couldn't come sick if he had a fever
stanza could 'shit out an award' but still wouldn't be an 'achiever'
when i'm done, the pan'll be attach to you sort of like peter
the edge will leave stanza cut up, cause i come with e meat cleaver
slow progress cause his process of making it come's like a snail
any slower you can move back, cause his delivery slower then mail
IM'ed me and said "please vote for me against nostradamus"
i promised i votes so i voted nos, well at least he lost honest
if stanza wanted to conceal his identity, he couldn't be able to
i'm like a life machine i bring him a flat line like it's fatal dude
stan's to much of a self glory person, you don't need medication*
you could board a plain an write your verse still would succeed in elevation
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Flow:stan
Structure:both
Word Play:stan
Metaphors:what ever it takes
Punches:what ever it takes
Personals:what ever it takes
Creativity:stan
Enjoyment:what ever it takes
Vote:what ever it takes

Explanation: both had good verses...personals and punchlines got it for this battle.....what ever it takes...wins on my count

pCe

can i get a RTF on my battle homies.....honest though....werd...its in my sig!
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