Voted For: Triple_N
Okay...I listened to both 5 minute tracks completely and here's the breakdown:
Triple:
The intro skit was hard to understand...didn't know where you where going with it
when you come in, your flow is hard
You hit the nail on the head with dooms...mad personals about how people don't like his arrogant ass
fish outta water line was good
Flow: 7.5/10
Rhyming: 7.5/10
Punches: clever in spots, 7.5/10
When you switched beats, it was highly effective in terms of chaging gears...you came in with a torrent of disses = good
the outro was funny, even Q-esque
Overall, I rate this 7.5/10
Dooms:
The first beat you used was bangin'
Flow was good at the start
However, I have some issues with your lyrics.
#1...You said something about "shit stains" in his drawers...how da fuck wud u know that...it's not even funny, it's repulsive
#2...You mentioned something about "how can you give advice" when I saw you in that thread saying "THANX TRIPLE FOR THE ADVIcE"....tsk tsk tsk = not good
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...302#post2412302
Furthermore, keep my name out ya mouth, HOE.
Now, at the end of your track, that beat was kickin and your flow was knockin on it...loved dat
Flow: 7 at the start 8 at the end so 7.5 total
Punches: 7/10
You lose this battle for 2 reasons...Triple's verse has way TRUER personals
Triple didn't contradict himself in his lyrics like you do.
This was a heavey hitter's battle
props to both
however TRIPLE wins, but only by a little...
Had you not contradicted yourself dooms, I may have voted for you because your flow at the end was that good
Vote: Triple
PERIOD...now run and get this HONEST vote Dq'ed
bitch
Removed.. due to beef