yea i was feelin both verses in places, but they both lacked something, mainly the depth like fyre pointed out. both had a nice flow to them and stayed consistent to the topic, although x-tortion is another person i have seen who uses the text style when he's doing his verse, the vocabs in both were minimal and you cud look to improve on that, overall i like apostrophe's better cuz he told a good story and he had the imagery going on for him..........

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