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Old 09-09-05, 09:35 PM   #7
Deranged
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Voted For: Shazz

Took you so long to reply to my thread like you were D/R
This is the internet ...can’t turn this into physically fighting
3...didn't rhyme and was kinda weak as a punch
You don’t understand this to new to the game Young Mic
Im the ~G~ …you the kid wanting to suck some guys dick
4....ok punch..but gay is played out now
"Ain't Need 2 Know Who I Am"(your sig) who is this T.I.
Who you think you are,im still sittin here waiting for a reply
5...good..liked the 1st line..
And if I'm…….. holdin a weapon you better get off me slut
Because I'll smash yah mug…….. like breakin a coffee cup
4...ok...

Kid u Gon Get Ripped-appart, is it all Clear like Crystal-Right?//
Never mind Kid so Retarted He Couldn't Tell da Difference Between his Left-n-Right,
2...elementary diss...i mean..couldn't tell differnce between left n right?..wtf?
Yet still he Think he gon be da Winner on this//
Da winners name Starts with a Y an Ends with a C on this Spit,
3...SG...not much of a punch
Give it up kid an i Don't mean it in a Wrong Way so don't Get it Twisted like a Rain-Bow//
I Spit so Much in All Different Directions might as well Call him my "Stained-Hoe",
3...Sg again...
Let Go u Ain't gonna Win, Truly u Ain't number 1//
50 dat's your Number or Should i Say Number 101,
3...rhymes 1 with 1 and weak punch
Still u can't see this kid a fake,Like a Golden Tooth in a Mouth Placed//
See as I Replace his Rhymes like Cavities waitin to be Filled-up With Feelings(Fillings)...Did i Hurt em Yet?
5...finnaly a decent bar

Ok..SHazz got this to me.
YM..first thing you gotta do is fix up your structure.Don't put this(//) at the end of ur shit.And get some better punches.I mean..couldn't tell differnce between left n right?WTF is that?I heard someone say that to someone else in elementary skool.And you wanna use it in a battle?Nah.Can't do that shit.Only decent bar was the last one.

Vote-Shazz