Voted For: mizz fyre

Metafo'-hmm...decent peice here.Saw the whole 3 different stories thing you did too.The best one was the 3rd one...cuz it was something we could relate to more.Best thing you had in ur verse was the transition.Line after line seemed to come after one another smoothly.Nothing really creative here.I thought the discription and all..was a bit..basic.Like...the stories I think needed some sort of twist or someting.Cuz it seemed to be missing something tho..as storylines go.

Mizz Frye-Lmao..stan-like verse here.I like the concept tho..about mother and son thingy.But really..the song stan made the whole letter/death at end thing a lil bland.Had some stretched lines in there too.But i liked the way you described ur lines and put it together.Seemed more complex and elaborate.Just work on flow and shit.

Close topical battle here...but..

Vote-Mizz Frye
RTF BELOW......(it's topical as well )
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909