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Old 09-09-05, 10:59 PM   #30
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Voted For: anxiety

Socrates-WOW.This was damn good.Liked the concept.About the couple relationship thing.About the middle where he was going back home..we kinda saw the ending coming.Suicide is a lil played nowadays in topicals.But the rest was all good.Didn't see much filler..stayed on the topic.Good shit.

Anxiety-Again..WOW.This also..was damn good.I esspecialy loved the topic.With the whole rap thing.Speccialy since all of us here can relate to that.So creativity was a full blow out..in your favor.I liked the transition in your verse too.Didn't see any fillers.But I think you got this for creativity

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RTF BELOW....(It's topical as well )
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909