Voted For: The Revelation

Soul?uest-Good drop here.Again..suicide in topicals is equal to gay in battles.It's played out.But aside from that..good.Lines were good.But the thing is..they weren't placed together well.Like..I saw a lot of filler.Lines that were there...but didn't tie to the topic or anything.And I also thought too many lines described the how the guy felt..like his lips quiver/shivers..too many lines like that.If you understand what I'm saying.

Revelation-DAMN good peice here.I liked it.Esspecially the 2nd verse.Those closing lines were classic.Hook was good.Nice metaphors and shit used to describe the shit.Didn't see much fillers.Good job.

One-sided to me...
Vote-Revelation
RTF below...(it's topical as well )
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909