decent pieces from both

both stayed consistent to the topic all the way through, both had a good flow and you both came with good approaches to the topic. the imagery in both pieces was good, you both had emotion in your piece and they gave nice pictures to the reader of the topic. i was feelin mizz fyre's piece more and i felt that she had more thought and feeling in her verse, she was a little more consistent in everything over DQ's piece, cud be down to she put down a longer piece and was still consistent, but i feel that DQ didnt really put a lot of effort into this piece and it just seems a little flat in places so my vote goes to...................MIZZ FYRE

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