A Life Of Chryme
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Voted For: .Lola Cruez. II
I feel that lola deserves this, simply becuz her verse is better
her structure was intact line for line....good flow. stanza i feel ur verse was not as well structurized
lola expressed her emotions and imagery to an extent that it was unbelievable...stanza urs was average....sub par. as for staying on topic both stayed on topic....but i feel lola was far more creative with her verse
vocab was taken by lola she used good enhanced vocab that made her verse deluctable.....lol
overall it was a no brainer v/.lola cruez ll
rtf on any of my battles, please and thank you
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A LIFE OF CHRYME
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