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Old 09-10-05, 02:45 PM   #10
B. Magik
Sam Dope
 
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Listening...

Beat is ok, not sure if Im feeling it or not...Not feeling the hook...its not really that creative...Quality is iffy, not horrible, but far from perfection...First verse, pretty good...Lyrical wise, this was nice...You threw in some multies, which I love, and your emotion was pretty nice...Could've been better though...Flow slipped a few times, but nothing major...Second verse, liking it a little better than the first verse...Lyrics were better, delivery was better, and flow and emotion were on point for pretty much the whole time...Third verse...Quality is better, flow is really good, didn't really catch any slip ups...Lyrics were decent, nothing spectacular, but you made up for it with your flow...

Return The Favor On My "Noone Else Comes Close" Track.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207381
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