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Old 09-10-05, 02:54 PM   #5
Willa
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1 bonecollector your flows gotten alot better from your other open mics from what ive seen nothign special lyrically you probably had the most generic verse but not bad
2 paranoid good flow and vocab yours was the most out of the box you had imagery i liked it my favorite verse props
3 cezar ok verse your first bar looks familiar?????? overall not very creative you had a few good lines but most of it was blah good flow though
4 lfs yoru verse was pretty creatvie you had good flow and good vocab props
5 sin cere i liked your verse yours was oen of the more creative ones props there were a few good lines i was feeling in there props ive never read any of your peices
6ysd@ you are on everything lol your verse was l;acking i thought lol ive seen far better from you yo u didnt come very creative at all oh well every 1 has duds sometiem

OVERALL- everyone had good flow vocab was inconsistent in soem verse btu not bad creativity you could have done better paranoid was the only one who came really creative and sin cere had a few creative lines but on the overall topic i think you guys could have been more creative i think yuou would have gotten more feed on a different topic since cs jsut did an open mic on sins structure was good in everyones verse overall decent drop
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