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damn man i love your style, them multiples were very good and broguth creativty to your flow and imagery, it really upps a lot of things if you can do it right and you did, you didnt use so much vocabulary all you did was a lil bit mixed with multiples nice mix man, props for the good drop, nice lil hook shit too

Willa
You better stick to topicals or i'll bum bang you

anyway on the first part of your verse you coulda used the {,} but i already explain that on aim. for the 2nd half i think it was a lot better, the line were shorter which gave better flow and stucutre, and you didnt use so much vocab, nice choices of words, but dont get me wrong vocab is nice to have, sometimes its nice to have lots, but really that depends on a topic kinda, same with how emcee's choose they're beats, anyway good job both of ya

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