I really like it.Was some deep shit. Id work on the hook but maybe it'd sound better wit a beat.My Fav lines by bone was
"My little cousin Jon was only 10 when his life was taken from me
Crip'n aint easy thats what he said,i just tell myself his soul was set free
Jarrett my nucca from way bacc,Why'd you have to rob that house
Then.....steal that car.....And merk that spouse.."

I was feelin that shit it had a real vibe to that shit
I loved the way paint flow when he rap so I loved the whole muthafuckin verse

"Rather be finding the secrets than opening chests and leave blood pouring,
Continue enduring, till I find the answer and start curing,"


"Where would I be? Provoking thoughts might put me in the cemetery,
Maybe I’m supposed to be there, easy to get shot by an adversary,
Random deaths, unnamed bodies in the mortuary,
Girls getting pregnant more times than they can carry,"

I LOved that shit You 2 need to do more shit

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