A Life Of Chryme
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My vote has to go to Blessed
Blessed-Your verse wass iight, i feel your structure was presented well...I was able to create a good flow in my head..Ur imagery and emotion was on point and i felt it helped me go along iin your piece.Vocab i felt was good, used some good wording...although i do feel some of your lines were forced rhymes (first 2 lines) but overall a solid drop.
Shodown-Your verse was quite basic. Your verse was not well structured.Being that way i was not able to create a good flow while i was reading it.Your imagery and emotion was just about average nothing too enhanced nor special.As for your vocab i feel you could up on that seeing in this verse it was quite basic.
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A LIFE OF CHRYME
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