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Old 09-11-05, 02:07 PM   #42
Shazz
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Voted For: Robert De Niro

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nah not feelin much of the @(&#$()@^##$(^#$ even though i do it but its too much...Didn't make sense at all...Flow was nothing..Wordplay was maybe the only thing you had no hate or D/r but i don't like your verse at all

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS-
You had not many personals ok word play and good flow. Good structure easy to read and i understood it , its better than what he spit , not sure if i would really take this verse in pride but ya you got the win good job.

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