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Old 09-11-05, 09:11 PM   #6
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Firetruck-
Good structure i enjoyed reading it. But very very basic like "you suck at rap, " you rap like crap" you know like that kinda stuff.... Ya it was good flow but not feelin it, Personals were ok though if you would have stretched it out a little more i think you would have got it


JRoy-
Terrible Terrible terrible terrible structure #1..... Ok wordplay and punches though both of you did pretty decent on it and good flow, you made sense in all your lines , you did alot of """"" ehh not feelin it. You did good overall though.

v/JROy
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