Wow,

.Lola Cruez. ll-Your verse was quite enjoyable...YOUR emotion was pinpoint, made your piece much more enjoyable to read...obviously much more written than MK for me, ur structure was honestly a problem in some points....i wasnt able to keep the flow going through out ur whole verse.....Nothing the less..ur imagery was good....creativity was outgoing and well thougt up....although i feel ur vocab was rather basic...which helped create the imagery......

MadKnight- Wow, this was a nice piece, Not as long as Lola's but deff. mad an impact. I feel your structure was pinpoint in every aspect. Great flow was created in my head. You fufilled your verse with a nice Enhanced vocab that helped create the flow.And create a good fufilling emotion to ur piece. Also ur imagery was well put together...liked how it came about....Creativity was there deff. good way to go abou tthe topic.

v/MadKnight simply for his immaculate verse

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