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Light Weight
From: Deviously Devine Desings |
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IP:
Voted For: Deranged
his first battle..but i'm certain..he ain't bound to go far
ur not up to par..only juelz this kid got is found in this avatar
this bitch can't write and i'ma kill him tonight,unheard
cuz tell me...who the fuck gives 7 days to type 1 verse
nutin but a herb..bout to get smoked to shreds and coated with red
cuz u the only one i know whose dickriders voted for u to be dead
yet u still go n brag..and to you..that's as good as it gets
u urban bitch..full wit stitch..the only hood to u is on ur head
i'ma waste you...& lase u..u suk up the trash like a whirlpool
cos beef comes n ur halling ass faster den frightened girls in school
what's whack in my eyes..is good to u...so who u think u cursin with?
cuz to me..this whole verse is trash..but u on ur knees worshipin it
kissin ass all u do...& ur breasts gettin burnt from huggin the rays
ur name's whack too...who the fuck still puts young in a name?
Blah..keyed up bullshit..
defiantely a 8.7/10 he had good flow punches n structure
...understand-me-kids..im-clamping-grips...\"to leave shells \'in-tent\'\'\"\"like-snails-having-camping-trips\"!!!!//
u-ranting-bltch..millz-got-u-standin-stiff....\"the only heat you own\"\"comes-in-tur-tled-necks\"!!!!//
u want beef?..hell...\"face-the-facts-ur-meats-lil\'\"..\"sorta like how ur condom needs-to-wear-a-seat..belt\"!!!//
..nlgga-im-hell-bound..surrounded-by-shell-clouds..\"slugs in ur tummy\"\"only time u gettin-filled-clown\"!//
i-dont-think-u-understood-dawg..\"ull be left with parts missin\"like-in-saw-when-the-doc-cut-his-own-foot-off\"!//
..so-fuk-ifs-&-would-of\'s..im-blowin-ur-hood-up....& leave u\"down for the count\"\"like-givin-dracula-bl0wjobs\"!//....
i didnt liekt he structure he ahd like 1 or 2 punches but they werent strong enough
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