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Old 09-12-05, 08:55 AM   #10
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Voted For: MC Firetruck

I put out the hottest MC's, so u wont be hard for me to kill
'Cuz u so gassed I'm surprised RV don't have a heating bill
4..meh...ok
Se me real, I mean focused...something that's unheard of
I never did kid's homework, but I'll complete Project Murda
3..weak
I burn ya, really what makes you think you rhyme dude?
Even if you did spit flames...your sig would still outshine you!
6...good
Try who? Me in a showdown? Elevate to your best
'Cuz change is good for some, but none of your shit makes cents
3..didn't rhyme and cents/sense relation is pretty much played out
You from Washington and I know you'll be the g to fall
I'ma black your eye so damn much you wont Seatalle
5.....ite
I'm leavin' y'all, he's got no heart I'm rippin' his chest
Continuous shots at J, too bad he always hittin' the bench
3...blah

DECENT VERSE.HAD SOME PLAYED SHIT LIKE THE CENTS/SENSE ONE.BEST LINE WAS PROBABLY THE OUTSHINE ONE.

Thinkin U The Best? U Just Betta 'Swallow That Shyt'//
U Couldnt Get A 'Leg Up' On Me At A 'Sneaker Store' 'Modelin Kicks'//
4....ok...2nd line was good..1st suked
My 'Split Personality' Must Yo Reason For Your 'Strange Behavior'//
mc firetrucks 'Resistance' Is 'Pointless' Like 'Kemo-Patients' Usin 'Electric Shavers'//
5...decent
I'll Take This Ingrade And 'Tuck His Ass' In Like 'Gay Pride Attractions'//
His Status Does 'Add Up' Like 'Odd Numbers In Fractions!'//
5...decent..nutin spectacular tho
With All Them Wack Personals, I Should 'Crack Your Spine As I Speak'//
The Only Props You'll Ever Be Gettin Is 'Punchlines Of The Weak'//
3....no...weak/week relation is damn played
U Droppin Is Pointless, 'Lose The Weight' And 'Run'//
Freeze Ya Gums- Cuz Yo Chances Of Spittin Is 'Slim 2 NumB'//
3...forced rhyming
Testin Your Faith Since U Commencin In 'Deranged-Hate'//
Gats 2 Ya Face, Place 'Viral Knives Thru This 'Ill' Character' And Literally 'Maim-Phate'//
3..weak shit and forced rhyme again

WELL.YOUR STRUCTURE WAS FUCKED.FIX IT UP.AND YOU STARTED OFF WITH SOME OK PUNCHES.BUT YOU JUST FADED OUT.I THINK WITH ABOUT 2 MORE DECENT PUNCHES..YOU WOULD HAVE WON THIS.

vote-MC firetruck

RTF in sig.