let me seeee... aight vendetta up first. flow is tite, i like ya lyrics this time, operatin room. tropical storm, hospital warm.. beat is nyce. now ya shyt towards tha end sound too much like g unit... aight hook is kinda copped offa 50's lyrics to me.. popular-popatcha ect... 2nd dude i reallly dont like at all.. ive never felt s large tho ferreal.. no emotion really, lyrics have nver appealed to me... aight now im just waitin for his part to finish... hook again, 20 now.. flow is aight, kinda on tha same shyt as usual... never talks about n e thing else besides guns n shyt. n i dont htink he owns a gun... o weeeelll thats what listenin to g unit n dipset too much lol... i think he has potential, if he switched up his lyrics and touched up here n there... but honestly vendetta u've become my fav out of ur click fursureee. i mean u've shown a vast improvement lately and i can actually listen to ya shyt now .. so i mean you got sumn goin for ya. good luck
o n, hit this link if u can
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207839
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aight i listened again, for debits part i caught that "tossin more shells than a tropical storm line" was tite..
i skipped second dudes part n wen t to 20's.. maaan he be usin tha most played concepts, all black 3 peice black whip, talkin about stompin his feet AGAIN, maan think up new shyt do u really sit around writin n b like yoo i kno what ima put in here A RECYCLED LINE!!! lol, n he is even like "like what i said in my last track, y'all better run dude" y would u talk about ya last track? n he punches in sooo much, if u ever gonna do a show u cant punch in, u just gonna b stumblin... so work on that ... sorry i wasnt tryin to b a dick, just noticed a few annoyances i had to get out lol..