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Old 09-12-05, 05:46 PM   #19
Dickard.
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Voted For: Tekneek

Yvonne

like his sig..this cats verse cudnt be nothin but blank
his more aimless than a misile dats y ur Tek's got no rank
^Good opener weak punch 4/10^
like a pastor castin out spirits ima wipe your hands outta text
you still wudnt catch 'Fiya' if u bit from 'Lady's' brext (breast)
^Good wordplay, decent punch 6/10^
like gatherin letters you still wouldnt catch a point like its scramble
NFA muh'fucker you'ld get diced if this shit was a gamble*
^Not feelin this, coulda been more creative 5/10^
i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped
like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped
^Again good wordplay, strong finish 7/10^
OVERALL:Ur verse was nicely structured gave it good flow, each of ur punches just kept rollin allong making them presented well.Ur personals were ok, coulda been more creative overall 6/10^

YouKay

dont know why yvonne decided to try-this-tyrant... .......
fucking hoar, i'll have any one of my DOGS, 'pee n shit on her' like she was a 'fire-hydrant'..... ......
^Awesome opener, good wordplay strong punch 8/10^
damn, i'm fillin this shit wit more 'punches' than 'bowls-at-proms'........ .....
ya verse was butt, but if i really wanted to see ass, why battle u, i'd juss call-ya-moms........ ...
^Meh, didnt like the flow, but still good creative diss 6/10^
lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... ....
we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^Lol, nice wordplay and good punch/closer felt it 8/10^
OVERALL:Ur verse was poorly structured...hard to get a flow but u made up for it with ur dope punches and tight personals....didnt lack much in this verse......overall 7/10^

v/YouKay

rtf in any of my battles, since i kinly peeped urs...make sure u explain ur vote.....peace
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