Voted For: Cdusit

V/cdusit

Cdusit-Ur verse was astonishing, i was moved by this.Your creativity in your verse was remarkable i was glad to see that u came up with something different.Your imagery u used in this piece was so vivid.I felt like i was there.Not to mention the emotion u used while in the diary.....this is a piece to remember.Ur structure is ok, flowed good i liked it a lot. Ur vocab was average..nothing to speciall....but made up for it wit ur vivid imagery...overall 9/10

Sin'cere-I actually wasnt feeling ur verse.I feel u had good intentions yet ur piece wasnt all that creative.Your structure was ok, got a good flow off of it..But ur emotion and imagery wasnt there....i dont feel this was a best effort entering this battle.Ur vocab was sub-par average nothing to enhance ur verse......overall not really fealing this 5/10^

v/Cdusit

Please rtf on any of my battles in my sig......since i kindly took a look at urs....my battles need votes...all are slept on....thanks.......and nice verse..1

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