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Old 09-12-05, 06:43 PM   #27
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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Voted For: AITZ

This battle was pretty much one sided,

GreenParty!-Ur verse was not quite appealing.You had very poor structurre that made the flow unbearable.Ur punches were poor and weak hitting, And had some forced rhymes in there....Ur personals were forced and not hard hitting......you have a lot of room for elevation.

Aitz-Ur verse was not that enjoyable either, It was poorly structuredWhich didnt really effect it, due to the mediocore punches that landed softly....due to ur good wordplay and such.Ur personals were also up there wit ur punches...although nothing special.I felt some of ur lines was stretched but still had a better verse.

V/AITZ

please rtf in my sig links, since i kindly voted on urs...be sure to leave honest explained vote.....unless u want this vote to be dq'd
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