Voted For: Robert De Niro

Yvonne

u wudnt be hotter dan a hoe cake even if u were from d oven
bitch,if u dot wanna Tripple like N count ur steps b4 u stolen
^MEH, wasnt feelin this punch/opener forced rhyme 2/10^
my punches make a hole between ur legs to make ut tigh dangle
watch him moan like triny when i knock him off 2 d state of mental
^Wow, again forced rhyme....not a hard punch 0/10^
babies break thru ya ego and make u re-arrange yr shit
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
^Simple jab, nothing special....4/10^
listen,even if you called urself god u still wunt get respect
cos nobody herre 2 act dramas,its all about lyrical effect
^No punch, bad closer.....coulda been stronger 0/10^
Overall:I actually dispised ur verse, no hate but seriuosly u have to atleast diss ur opponentl.....ur only punch wasnt even in ur verse lmao.....ur punches were soft and barely felt...as for personals i feel they were left out and absent.........overall 4/10^

What Ever It Takes

IP:


Yvonne's at a fork in the road, which way will she choose?
i'd say she'd go right........but she went left just to loose
^Good opener, nothing special...4/10^
i guess you would get a vote.....if the system ever won
but it's wins stuck at 0 sort of like elevationg from Yvonne(Y-Von)
^Meh, not feelin this punch....sorta forced 3/10^
she's from her crib, is that next to a bench and her guitar
i mean come on, your verse described just how whack you are
^Pretty decent punch, i felt the flow...decent 6/10^
your tung tied, with no spits, i guess she chocked and froze
sorry to break the news..but it's the opposite of dope you compose
^Good closer, felt the ending....and good punch 7/10^
Overall:I felt your verse was average...Ur structure was tight, good flowing verse.Ur punches were there and soft at times....felt they were PREtty decent mon.Ur personals were iight....nothing special nor hard hitting....overall ur verse was pretty decent overall 6/10^

rtf on my sig link, since i took the time to vote on ur battle.......my battles need voting...they all slept on so make sure to leave an honest explained vote thnx peace

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