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Old 09-12-05, 09:19 PM   #67
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this was a good battle deranged verse was better though fo the fact that his vocab was good and his flow was on point through out the whole verse i like the emotion also and how the concept went along with the topic this was a good battle but deranged take this and also mystic chaos you forced some of your lines also for example:
"Fearing for my life no response in return as the demons lead the way
Needing my soul for the extinction of god Thinking i will not live to see another day"
that line was streched and forced good verse though
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