listening

1st......not fleeling the flow in some parts.....somelines are coo but some are wack....talking about guns and shit...dont beleave....

chorus...is ok but

2nd....flow is aight, but not feeling the style.....qality is not so good, lines is aight, you need to elevate a lil more to be decent but its aight, the first guy was better

i like how th ebeat stops during the chorus.....

3rd...your lines are aight, i like how you rap like this and you can rap that other shit also, like when you owned cali......i woulndt believe some of the shit you say tho..


aigh the first guy sounded liek he had a lisp, not sure, he could have done alot better i hope, not sure about the intro or whatever on mtv shit but hey we all have dreams.
2nd guy was not that good dont think he can make it to mtv..but we all got problems
20g you where the best otu of the crew and youo had a coo chorus kinda catchy, your verse could have had my better flow different rhyme scheme or something

i dont believe you guys would pop anyone so thatys the only thing i dont like..

sorry but just keeping it real