Voted For: mizz fyre

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Metafo'-You came pretty good structure was aight could have been better i didnt really see any vocab here though witch is not nessacary but it helps im not seein the imaginary though tha verse looked like a whole bunch of rhymin words just thrown into a structured format gotta make that shit mean suttin dawg know what im sayin tha set up of your verse was good though decent drop..pz

Mizz fyre-Structure on this is better than ive seen in your previous topicals so good job had some vocab witch is good had a good story not tha greatest imaginary but it got tha job done always room for improvement feel me...you kept me intrested in tha story though so thats why i gotta give this to you good job to both though pz...

Vote/Mizz Fyre

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