First off it was kinda hard to read as the structure was for an audio verse, but still it flowed well so who gives a fuck.

You had decent imagery and emotion

our headlines hit with, corrupts MP's, missin person
gang shootings, drugs, another person murdered
i cant even bare to think bout the shit that ive heard of
cant make sense, and the shit just gets worse
everyday, theres a war, in everyplace of the world
government fucks u over, wether u man, woman, boy or girl

RAW^^

Good shit fam.

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