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Old 09-13-05, 07:06 PM   #10
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Voted For: hotshh!

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
5.....decent....didn't like 1st line though and how is panic=pan-ice?..
Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
6...good
Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
3...this was weak..becuz..I mean..inner child?wtf?
Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
3...no...c'mon...esspecially that 1st line..and stop with the explamation points...
hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
5...decent..nothing spectacular..but decent
I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
4...good concept with the whole hit the roof..but....sat on floor?

I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
6...good
22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
6...good...but would have hit harder if it wasn't for the set-up..if he got a good rec..don't mention it
LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
3..played..i've heard this before
"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
5...good
Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
6..hmm..good..but leaf lines are gettin played now...
Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
8...best bar in this battle..multis were nice too..

Ok..hotshh! got this.
Daubs..I thought you had some decent concepts,but ur wording was bad and so were ur set-ups.Such as the hit the roof line and the but of pistol.But then again..some lines were just based off bad concepts.Like..how is panic>pan-ice?Just like that..an E comes out of the word?And then...that snatchin kids line..now..ur concept was..touchin inner child?NO.A couple of multis in ur verse was abit forced too.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208431


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