I like the first verse man, good lyrics, and emotion. Feel you coulda rode the beat a little better, but I like the way you werent afraid to hit the mic wit passion. Thats key. I like how you layered the hook real light like. Like you didnt try and overpower it, and ruin the strength of the singer on there. You came on it to add another level, and it turned out ok. This is hella RnBish... oh wait - there is another verse. ok ok. yea this is nice man. Good drop. Hella emotional, prolly not somethin i would rock on my player, but good track. word

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