u know dis...

aiight some real feed except : "OMEN yo, this SHIT IS FIYA..SENSER IS TOO DOPE" type AIM messages lmao

1)tight intro when ur talking....loose tha like gremlin mated with cruella daville bit..."main invent bit...twisted mofos bit" sounds wack n dont fit with whole dope vibe of beat

2)omen ur flow slips a lil...ur hella more lyrical than normal but still incorporating a lil more wordplay like da nasa bar...u say ur re-doing, id say drop ur fans a dope ass punchline of some sort..id say up ur delivery stick some anger in dat mofo....imagine ur talking to leady lmao...dope nonetheless

3)hook...real nice...needs a couple of adlibs or a layer of sumin else...also its a lil choppy dnt flow real...i reckon its real catchy....also...only overdub "when we come around" imo.

4)ya boy lepht of paypah rec right?....his mix is a lil low in volume...he got the arrogance on lock, typa arrogance id associate wid a black man tho...lmao @ crown line....basically his verse is kinda solid...needs a better mix and to change up his flow a lil wid a more angry delivery ta suit beat

5)awwwwwwwwwwwwwww shit....k da patented "senser motherfuuuuuuccckkker"..building anticipation....i basically aint buying this a freestyling, the flow is to nice 4 it to be....sense got the delivery locked and his adlibs r on point...multis flowing real nice...ya voice n flow jus merk dis mofockin beat...omen says u like 19? dayum

6) outro of accapella hook works well

In conclusion ---- omen n lepht need to up quality to tie in wid sense's or get sum1 illt a mix it all....this shit gon b FIRE when its finished i know it

PS - omen ima find us a beat 4 ma mixtape foo.....and yo Senser u need ta bless me wid a 16 on a track yo...also "we got next vol.1" when tha fuck dat gon drop


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