Voted For: criminal

Reach.
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I peep'd ur past, and son....your ass
Your lines are longer than paragraphs
(nice punchline)
Wit the dash'-An'SlaSH! shit, save the space
Your just an example that Trojans break...
(weak..)
A straight mistake a mis hap a broken criminal,
The only conviction u hold is bein invisible
(dude, i'd love to be invisible)
I break your spine an coccix, switch cords an spit,
Just to give a legitamite reason for u to spit shit
(no flow)
This Convict's Cut, Shower time...Your Fucked
This Boy's got less delivery than a Pizza Hut
(was ok but didnt hit hard..)
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criminal
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The Best Regarded, Aggressive, Times up!, so Set ya Guard Up
Ya ‘words above mine’?, NEVER, unless I Replied to a Thread YOU STARTED!
(good)
When I spit and say “there ain’t a whole lot to it”, It’s cuz it was an EASE-to-Bust…
But when YOU spit and I say “see there ain’t a whole lot to it” it’s cuz it was WEAK-as-FUCK!!!
(lol, nice line im feeling that)
In stead of “markin his set backs” he carves “Progress-in-his-Memory”
So I “Squash the beef” and “heat it when it’s In my grill” like Hamburger’s “Process-and-Delivery”
(long as fuck but after re-reading it i got what you mean)
Yall “cop out” like “police shift endings” when they Leavin-for-their-Own-Homes
Claimin ya ain’t “seen nuthin worth replyin to”…that’s cuz you still Readin-all-ya-Own-Flows
(nice personal..)
Doesn’t matter HOW NICE you are cuz I CRUSH-Vet’s-Perfect-Spits…
Because it’s “easy to clown you” like “One-Step-Circus-Kits”!!
(this was a nice mix, personal n punchline, good work)


criminal you need to work on cuttin down your lines, so your verse flows better, but you had it 4 me...and
Reach, you need to work on vocab, and punchlines...

werd..

v/criminal

RTF ppl...they in my sig

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